General IELTS Writing Task 1 Correction: Write a letter to a course coordinator

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your course coordinator. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir Mr. Berney,

I am Maria one of your student in a French Language evening course student at French Friendly Academy. I am writing this letter to inform you that next Friday 15th March will be my last class. ==>This seems too harsh. Do you really want to set this tone?

Though I love attending your classes, unfortunately I may have to discontinue the course.

I am working as Secretary for in a big factory [name the company/factory], and now my department’s chief is offering me a promotion. [Do you really want to leave the course for a promotion? That sounds too selfish. Isn’t it? Let us set a more amiable tone.] greater responsibilities that will demand my presence in the evening as well.

I am enthusiastic with this preferment but the position available is in Buenos Aires and for that reason, I am going to move there next April and I do not able to attending the course anymore.

Moreover, I’ll soon be transfered to undertake similar responsibilities in Buenos Aires. Consequently it will be nearly impossible for me to attend classes from 15th of March.

However, I would like to continue learning French and I was thinking of an online course. I do not know if you have any online class or maybe you can recommend me a good website or teacher.

I am Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours sincerely,

Maria.

General IELTS Writing Task 1 Correction: Write a letter to a course coordinator
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